Edward
McAuley
Kwan Ha
Rhetoric 103a
10/18/16
Illiad
Book IX: Diomed's speech to Agamemnon and his fellow fighters while in council
Diomed holds that the goal of the Acheans is a goal
ordained by the gods in the heavens. He believes it is the destiny of the
Acheans to win the present battle against the Trojans. He argue that to abandon
the battle is to embrace cowardice and that even if every last man leaves the
battleground, he and Sthenelus will continue the fight until they reach Ilius.
Diomed rises to address Agamemnon, referring to Agamemnon
as "Son of Atreus." In doing so, he refers to Agamemnon's lineage in
which he is descended from the Greek God, Zeus. He appears to refer to Zeus in
this manner in order to remind him and the council of Agamemnon's family
lineage, because Agamemnon has just wept openly to the council and suggested
they return to Achaea as a defeated army. Diomed states clearly that he has
risen to "chide" Agamemnon, which he claims is his right while the
council is in chambers. That is to say he announces his plan to find fault with
Agamemnon and scold and censure him for the argument Agamemnon put forward to
the army's leadership while in council.
Diomed refers to Agamemnon's argument as
"folly." Here Diomed is indeed chiding Agamemnon with the term folly;
by using this term he derides Agamemnon's words as foolish, thoughtless, and
unwise. He cautions Agamemnon to allow himself to become "aggrieved"
by Diomed's words and he gives reasons for why Agamemnon should not be
aggrieved, implying that his words are justified. First he recounts Agamemnon's
verbal attack on Diomed while in front of the Danaans where Agamemnon called
Diomed a coward and claimed he was not of the character or courage to be a
soldier, and was therefore "no soldier." He gives evidence for
this by claiming the Argives, "young and old," are aware of the event
in which Agamemnon attacked Diomed and made these charges. Then Diomed makes
his attack personal against Agamemnon's character and abilities.
Diomed then asserts that while Agamemnon has honor as a
ruler, this is useful only in his leadership and administrative capacities. But
when it comes to battle, Diomed argues, Agamemnon lacks courage in the face of
danger. "Valor" Diomed argues, is the highest "might" and
the highest "right," but he claims Agamemnon does not possess valor
and therefore is not qualified to lead such men as the Achaeans in battle. In a
multi-themed rhetorical question intended to set-up his own answer, Diomed asks
Agamemnon if he thinks the sons of Achaeans are "unwarlike" and
"cowardly" as he claims Agamemnon has implied. The first themeatic implication of the rhetorical question is one in
which Diomed has now turned the implications of the words against Agamemnon,
implying that it is Agamemnon who is unwarlike and cowardly, the evidence for
which may be found in his desire to flee the battle and return home. He then
answers his rhetorical question by stating that he and the rest of his fighters
will stand and fight; they will not return with Agamemnon. Diomed tells
Agamemnon that if his sights are set on returning home, then he ought to take
his ships an flee. But as for he and his fellow warriors, they will stay and
fight. Even, he says, if the other Achaeans fell and leave only himself and Sthenelus,
then he and Sthenelus will stand alone and fight until they reach Ilius because
heaven was with them from the outset.
I chose this argument made by Diomed because it shows
exemplary courage of conviction in the face of defeat and harsh odds. It is the
argument of a man who absolutely believes in his cause and whose charisma is so
powerful and convincing that he is able to reinvigorate a wholly dejected and
defeated army council, deriding defeatism, exalting valor and courage, and rallying them to belief in possible
victory.
1 comment:
Edward,
This is very good close reading; you clearly understand the content of this passage and the exchange between Agamemnon and Diomed. The only problem I see with your précis is that you need to clarify the parts of this war speech as you go through your analysis with some transitions; since it is a short passage, let the major points shine more clearly. There are some mechanical problems and confusing sentences that I believe can be rectified with just one more revision. Also, I would have liked to see even more critical interrogation into the rhetorical function at play since it is embedded in a scene with Agamemnon and the military: what is it about the speech that makes it efficacious over and above Agamemnon's cry to give up on Troy?
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